1. I agree with what you say, and that is why this is killing me, because I LOVE WHAT I HAVE. I LOVE IT. And I don't know what I'm doing. But dialogue isn't the only way to show, and I do a lot of showing though physical actions (he turns his wedding band on his finger, she slams her chair into the doorframe) and I don't get how a lack of dialogue is taking away from that. you know? It's the quiet of the narrative that makes the dialogue important then, and that's what's important, because words are important even when they're not.
Oh no. I just launched into my inner monologue about Jepthah's daughter.
Sookie slash, It has to be out there. I fangirl Charlaine like mad.
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Date: 2009-07-01 03:37 pm (UTC)Oh no. I just launched into my inner monologue about Jepthah's daughter.
Sookie slash, It has to be out there. I fangirl Charlaine like mad.