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Nick ([identity profile] cruentum.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] amand_r 2010-01-21 07:04 pm (UTC)

I want to have a bath with Jack. It looks like it would be fun! I do like how Ianto's the stroppy little bitch in this and then sorta comes around to the idea of it when yknow it sorta works (I didn't want to say when someone has a hand on his dick, but ... yeah). I did like how you took the bathtub stuff/trope (is it a trope?) and made it work for the two of them, in that kind of realistic-bath approach and I liked the bubbles (Why do Mr Bubble's crotch bubbles look like a dick? That's disturbing).

"This has been the most unproductive bath in history," he said. "No one was cleaned, no one was relaxed, and no one was warmed."

LOL at Ianto.

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